Category Archives: criticism

My Injured Prince

Through the screeching sound of judgement, you talk as though we are prey standing in performance theater, raising my heartbeat you wish to make it yield to your power You must break something if your spell is not cast If … Continue reading

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Your clinginess…

Your clinginess follows me like an afterthought. Really bad cologne. A bad song that won’t leave my head. Didn’t used to bother me as much before, but you just had to wave a flag and bring it all out into … Continue reading

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Love Addict

Kristen Dushong; 27 years old, two boys to take care of. She is the girl next door who sneaks a smoke outside your garage. She is simple and beautiful with a (small) hint of exotic. Long natural hair, never colored.  … Continue reading

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Unfinished

She is their crime of passion. Soundless screams escaping from her wilting luck. Can’t imagine what doesn’t reach her. Then again, she has more than enough imagination so she probably raises her head and pictures the closed doors that won’t open. Spins, … Continue reading

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my generation

I might do a redo with it being more choppy, diced, for when I read it out loud I have ideas about cutting stuff out- just the filler words. making it less accessible in some ways faster flow in others. … Continue reading

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Emotional Terrorists

WORK IN PROGRESS!! She speaks a language of blame. With her, blame will explain why she “never saw another butterfly.” Blame can fix her torn blouse, assuage her guilt, and make the wound that life has become tolerable. Her emotional … Continue reading

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uncertain transition chambers

No broken bones or bruises, but how would I know? Maybe a stream of blue powder was released into my face, like in that one episode of Fringe, with the doll, the nametag, the suspicious packaging, and the hee-hee-hee that … Continue reading

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